The other day,I watched the videos of a special lec-ture,given by the Shenzhou-13 crew members from space.The space lecture was an eye-opening experience.To sharemy feelings and what I've learned from the lecture with myclassmates,I'm planning to write an article for our schoolEnglish paper.I've already finished the fist draft,whichis attached to the email.However,I am not quite sure ofthe vocabulary and grammar that I used.Would you pleasepolish it if it is convenient for you?I'll be grateful if youhelp me with that.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua